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It's all in the progress you make :). Have been away for a bit, but this is brand new! Feedback on the new take is appreciated!

Hope you like it! Comments and :+fav: are appreciated! :D
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Bickhamsarah Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the lines at the bottom. I think it all fits, the shapes and such. The only thing I don't feel goes are the words. I mean, I like the words or rather the message, but I don't like that you have them in the rectangles. (not exactly sure how to describe that correctly XD)

Other than that, I really like this piece. I always love it when I see new works from you in my messages. Makes me get all excited. :D
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Matt023 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Maybe if I would make the squares bigger like wongSlam said... Keeping it minimal is hard...
Awww you are too kind, I'm excited if you comment too :D. Thank you :).
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Bickhamsarah Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I've never tried minimal. I love looking at some minimal things though. : )

I try. :hug: Ur most welcome, Matt. 
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wongSlam Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Interesting composition! I like the minimalistic gradient with an interesting image in the center idea. I get the message. Text with the square background behind it is neat, might try widening the squares a bit, just a thought.

The dotted line shapes are really cool, I like that level of detail! However the long dotted line at the bottom feels a bit out of place. Maybe match the size of the line with the shapes or do something different, that's just my take on it.

Overall, it's a good image. Keep on at it, as you said, it's all about progress :)
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Matt023 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!I will certainly keep your suggestions in mind :D.
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